雅思作文积累

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同义替换

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替换：do —> attend —> participate —> take —> engage

翻译：做 —> 参加 —> 参加 —> 采取 —> 参加

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替换：think —> argue —> agree —> assume —> belive —> compare —> claim —> conclude—> descirb —> demonstrate —> illustrate —> point out —> present —> notice —> suggest —> suppose —> reckon —> forecast —> predit

翻译：思考 —> 主张 —> 同意 —> 假设 —> 相信 —> 比较 —> 主张 —> 得出结论 —> 描述 —> 演示 —> 说明 —> 指出 —> 当前 —> 通知 —> 建议 —> 假设 —> 估计 —> 预测 —> 预测

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替换：people —> individual —> human —> persons —> folks

翻译：人 —> 个人 —> 人 —> 人 —> 人们

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替换：all —> whole —> entire —> complete —> total —> overall —> every —> at large

翻译：所有 —> 全部 —> 全部 —> 完整 —> 全部 —> 整体 —> 每个 —> 广大的

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替换：be require to —> be ask to

翻译：被要求 —> 被要求

举例说明

Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both individual tennager and society as a whole.

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Numerous individuals argue that it should be mandatory for all students to engage in volunteer work during their leisure time to contribute to the local community. They firmly believe that this practice would yield positive outcomes for both the students themselves and society at large.

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举例说明

It is believed by some people that all teenagers should be compelled to engage in unpaid work during their leisure time to assist the local community. It is believed that this would bring benefits to both the individual teenagers and society as a whole.

合并使用

There is a viewpoint held by certain individuals suggesting that every teenager ought to participate in voluntary activities during their free time to support the local community without receiving payment. They are of the opinion that such engagement would have impacts on both the teenagers themselves and the entire society.

一些人认为，每一名青少年都应该在业余时间参加志愿活动，以支持当地社区，而不收取报酬。他们认为，这种参与将对青少年本身和整个社会产生影响。

作文主体

分论点写法

CHESTLE写作法

C:cultural

H:healthy

E:economic

S:social

L:legal

E:enviromental

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Taffic and hosing problems in major cities could be svlved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

1.Agree:

lower land price in contryside —— decline house price —— affordable.

increasing cunstomers flow —— promote the economy development of rural area —— govenment can hold enough budget to construct real estate(房地产）and transportation systems —— the number of apartment rising —— be mitigated

the root case of traffic and hoseproblem is high density of population —— reduced density, more space and areas would be avaible for buliding road,flats,parks,due for be relocation —— more reasonable for solving traffic congestions(拥挤) and housing problem be soliving.

2.Disagree

relocation —— need funds support to rebuild factories,companies and infrastracture —— only owners/goverment will pay for uses —— connot affod to build as money constructions as they need

asking for renting or purchasing a property again —— extra living cost/spending/expenditure —— cause a huge finance burden get immense

compared with big cites,public transportation system in suburden is not completed enough —— frequently use private cars —— roads conditions in countryside are not as advanced as those a major cities —— more traffic congestion/accidents ——commeting —— spent plenty of time.

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Some people think that education and training are more effctive ways to deal with criminals than sending them to prison.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Agree

master(掌握) career skills > attend pruduction > financial return > save daily operation cost > reduce financial burden for goverment\

avoid being unable to find a stable job to earn one’s living > decrease second criminal rate

unconscious(无意识) crime > allow them to recognize(承认）their own guilty or fault > avoid being criminal again

humanity > offer an opportunity to start anew L:

goverment needs to enforce/publish a senies of relevant policies for new solutions,which can promote the department of current legal system and make it more reasonable and reliable

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Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions.To what extent do you argree or disagree with this opinion?

Disagree

deter the dissemination(传播）of culture > negative for globalization/forming mult-culture > lead to(导致） cultural barries（屏障）

E: the decreasing number of foregin vistors > lead to a declining(减少） fiscal/financial revenue due to the acending ticket price.

S: unfair > descrimination(歧视) > political(政治上的) conflict > unstable

Agree

pay more attention to the local attractions,urge the to value the indigenous culture and history(respect)

it can promote the ecomomic development of local tourism industy > goverment can acqure more fiscal revenue , a recruit professional teams to recover and protect heritages; employ cleaners and security staff to create a better tourism experience > attract more vistors

urban dweller(居民) will treat it as welfare > generate a strong sense of belong/identity > stable/satisfication

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The society is based on law and rules. The society would not function(运转） well if individuals were free to do whatever they want.To what extent do you agree or disagree？

Agree

让步：If there were too many rules and law the economic of individuals and socity would be hinder(阻碍，limit,block,restrict,deter,restain）

individuals > high incmoe earners who are subject to strict tax rate will be lose motivation(动力）to earb higher salary

socity > to many limits exist on business > commerical activities/behavior connot be implement > bussiness not thrived(flourish 繁荣 prosper 兴旺）

反驳：If there were no law and rules ,the economy would be collapsed

moral principles would not exist any more > not trust and repect each other > betray others due to own sake > cannot trade with each other

only make efforts for own interest/benefits > no more teamwork spirit/cooperation > reduced eddiciency and productivity > almost all the factories and companies would shut down urder such a destructive situation. S:

If there were no rules and laws in our city ,the society would sink into chaos.

traffic regulations >more traffic congestions/accidents > death rate asended > unstable

sell fake products online without punishment(处罚）> more and more merchants imitate this illegal behavior > cause the closure of online slopping platform /service > only can choose offline stores > lead to on inconvenient(不方便） and non-flexible lifestyle.